Sean Pendr

in albert varitorum's work in progress the secondary character, Walst, the moronic theif, pushes a completely random guy off a clif for no reason. until you read the footnote of ...

Hiya Lindsay! this is a good start i beleive that you should continue.. you might need a little more detail to answer some questions the reader might have about the ...

Keep trying and all things will work out in the end. remember "Thoughts manifest." (eventually)........ GOOD LUCK!!!!! :D

Valkaries are nothing like angels in fact angels a the cristian deprival and twisted version of valkeries. valkeries are warrior godeeses, daughters of Odin, they are sent to help the ...

simple really alll you need to do is place discritpions in thoughts or speech and weave the events through action words...... i hope that helps have fun! :)

if you want a sherlock holmes or that kind of type i can definatly help you there if i dont give you enough info in this you can pm me ...

agian with the coma thing....your character could have tried to commit suicide by shooting himself and ended up loging the bullet into his medulla self inducing a temporary coma or ...